a moon, worn as if it had been a shell: Haiku my heart

Friday, July 2, 2010

Haiku my heart

Yes, really. I'm doing it again.

Mermaid

It's just a pillow

In the ocean, all is dark

A door opens, light.

See more haiku at recuerda mi corazon.

17 comments:

Greyscale Territory said...: The idea of pillow softness and a door opening to light is often enough to give us hope! Lovely!; July 2, 2010 1:13 AM
Ms. Moon said...: Thank you for reminding me to open the door.; July 2, 2010 3:40 AM
todreamofstars said...: Light! the simplicity and beauty of it!; July 2, 2010 5:04 AM
Magical Mystical Teacher said...: a pillowed mermaid
longing for ocean’s cold depths
and briny comfort

Haiku My Heart … Suddenly!; July 2, 2010 5:21 AM
rebecca said...: please don't stop!

you have a heart for this...; July 2, 2010 5:32 AM
deb did it said...: Encore! Bravo!; July 2, 2010 5:51 AM
Delphyne said...: Very sweet haiku.; July 2, 2010 6:20 AM
gretchen said...: Lovely. I'm afraid my haiku tend to be...dirty.; July 2, 2010 8:27 AM
swallowtail said...: arg! must practice Haiku
remember the syllable and syntax
and rhythm and spelling

love life light
with mermaids; July 2, 2010 10:15 AM
Stephanie said...: simply beautiful; July 2, 2010 12:17 PM
Kimmie said...: "in the ocean, all is dark" that always scared me about the ocean - the depths of it - but your open window and sweet mermaid make it all seem fine; July 2, 2010 3:38 PM
paper-n-soul said...: A hint of hopeful mystery... nice.; July 2, 2010 4:16 PM
turquoise cro said...: i LOVE the LIGHT!!!; July 2, 2010 4:20 PM
Tanya @ TeenAutism said...: I love the composition - both the photo and the haiku!; July 2, 2010 4:33 PM
Caya-Papaya said...: lovely. I love mermaids, your cute pillow, and you haiku!; July 2, 2010 8:30 PM
Sarah said...: I love the connection of ideas in your Haiku. Lots to think about in your beautiful words and image!; July 3, 2010 11:06 AM
Uma said...: This is beautiful.; July 4, 2010 6:47 PM

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