tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4863417462909147257.post6764108462135021780..comments2024-01-01T20:33:52.554-08:00Comments on a moon, worn as if it had been a shell: Gold in black and whiteElizabethhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03313726816776097840noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4863417462909147257.post-88469671802790932522013-04-22T17:17:15.799-07:002013-04-22T17:17:15.799-07:00When I am down, I find it particularly soothing to...When I am down, I find it particularly soothing to be the one on the outside watching that solitary fish, circling in the barely-rippling water, hearing only the muted sounds from outside and not having to drive anyone anywhere or clean up your own poop.<br /><br />You are a wonder. I hope the water is warm and you take time to just float.kariohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10150537989886423212noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4863417462909147257.post-37320150797481093762013-04-21T08:33:13.689-07:002013-04-21T08:33:13.689-07:00Gorgeous...Gorgeous...ehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11376645220662546020noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4863417462909147257.post-60109771005891855032013-04-21T07:48:42.240-07:002013-04-21T07:48:42.240-07:00wow! you capture so much in this. wow! you capture so much in this. Taradharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17665801586196931603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4863417462909147257.post-9042613444019758052013-04-21T04:38:49.785-07:002013-04-21T04:38:49.785-07:00sublime, eee, sublime.sublime, eee, sublime.Christy Shakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106761191160700997noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4863417462909147257.post-56242476662912315472013-04-21T00:18:41.401-07:002013-04-21T00:18:41.401-07:00I feel it -- the circling, the monotony. Excellent...I feel it -- the circling, the monotony. Excellent, effective poem. The gold is beautiful agains that black and white, though. :)Steve Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11684120060438252945noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4863417462909147257.post-5189024972983832782013-04-20T18:46:38.402-07:002013-04-20T18:46:38.402-07:00unplug for a bit..does wonders for the pocketbook....unplug for a bit..does wonders for the pocketbook..ain't for city galshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14938751007704247232noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4863417462909147257.post-4860832222926642182013-04-20T18:18:32.259-07:002013-04-20T18:18:32.259-07:00This is the best poem you've posted all week. ...This is the best poem you've posted all week. So there, beautiful. Ms. Moonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09776404747858099919noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4863417462909147257.post-85323728563878752662013-04-20T16:46:43.133-07:002013-04-20T16:46:43.133-07:00beautiful writing.beautiful writing.L. Petershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09495560962339948104noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4863417462909147257.post-66127519718575542682013-04-20T16:33:51.962-07:002013-04-20T16:33:51.962-07:00I love it when you get poemy. this is gorgeous you...I love it when you get poemy. this is gorgeous you know and heartrending.<br />xoxoxRadish Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06534752971317927559noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4863417462909147257.post-69817637506542797142013-04-20T15:27:18.738-07:002013-04-20T15:27:18.738-07:00This is a fantastic poem. This is a fantastic poem. 37paddingtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12400464105403622384noreply@blogger.com