Friday, July 2, 2010

Haiku my heart

Yes, really. I'm doing it again.



Mermaid

It's just a pillow
In the ocean, all is dark
A door opens, light.




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17 comments:

  1. Gemma WisemanJuly 2, 2010 at 1:13 AM

    The idea of pillow softness and a door opening to light is often enough to give us hope! Lovely!

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  2. Ms. MoonJuly 2, 2010 at 3:40 AM

    Thank you for reminding me to open the door.

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  3. AnonymousJuly 2, 2010 at 5:04 AM

    Light! the simplicity and beauty of it!

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  4. Magical Mystical TeacherJuly 2, 2010 at 5:21 AM

    a pillowed mermaid
    longing for ocean’s cold depths
    and briny comfort

    Haiku My Heart … Suddenly!

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  5. rebeccaJuly 2, 2010 at 5:32 AM

    please don't stop!

    you have a heart for this...

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  6. deb did itJuly 2, 2010 at 5:51 AM

    Encore! Bravo!

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  7. DelphyneJuly 2, 2010 at 6:20 AM

    Very sweet haiku.

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  8. gretchenJuly 2, 2010 at 8:27 AM

    Lovely. I'm afraid my haiku tend to be...dirty.

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  9. Laura Paine CarrJuly 2, 2010 at 10:15 AM

    arg! must practice Haiku
    remember the syllable and syntax
    and rhythm and spelling

    love life light
    with mermaids

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  10. AnonymousJuly 2, 2010 at 12:17 PM

    simply beautiful

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  11. UnknownJuly 2, 2010 at 3:38 PM

    "in the ocean, all is dark" that always scared me about the ocean - the depths of it - but your open window and sweet mermaid make it all seem fine

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  12. paper-n-soulJuly 2, 2010 at 4:16 PM

    A hint of hopeful mystery... nice.

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  13. turquoise croJuly 2, 2010 at 4:20 PM

    i LOVE the LIGHT!!!

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  14. Tanya @ TeenAutismJuly 2, 2010 at 4:33 PM

    I love the composition - both the photo and the haiku!

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  15. Deann LMFTJuly 2, 2010 at 8:30 PM

    lovely. I love mermaids, your cute pillow, and you haiku!

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  16. SarahJuly 3, 2010 at 11:06 AM

    I love the connection of ideas in your Haiku. Lots to think about in your beautiful words and image!

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  17. UmaJuly 4, 2010 at 6:47 PM

    This is beautiful.

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