Friday, July 2, 2010

Haiku my heart

Yes, really. I'm doing it again.



Mermaid

It's just a pillow
In the ocean, all is dark
A door opens, light.




See more haiku at recuerda mi corazon.

17 comments:

  1. The idea of pillow softness and a door opening to light is often enough to give us hope! Lovely!

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  2. Thank you for reminding me to open the door.

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  3. Light! the simplicity and beauty of it!

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  4. a pillowed mermaid
    longing for ocean’s cold depths
    and briny comfort

    Haiku My Heart … Suddenly!

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  5. please don't stop!

    you have a heart for this...

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  6. Lovely. I'm afraid my haiku tend to be...dirty.

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  7. arg! must practice Haiku
    remember the syllable and syntax
    and rhythm and spelling

    love life light
    with mermaids

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  8. "in the ocean, all is dark" that always scared me about the ocean - the depths of it - but your open window and sweet mermaid make it all seem fine

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  9. A hint of hopeful mystery... nice.

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  10. I love the composition - both the photo and the haiku!

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  11. lovely. I love mermaids, your cute pillow, and you haiku!

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  12. I love the connection of ideas in your Haiku. Lots to think about in your beautiful words and image!

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