Monday, January 2, 2012

What's left




The leaves were raked up not down, Jesus Christ you said, too early and angry I thought, too dry, too old, what's left.


Small Stone 2

7 comments:

  1. There is so much power in leaving out details

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  2. Elizabeth, this is really compelling--Kimmie, above, is right. There's such power in this light sketch of a moment.

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  3. So much resonance in so few words. Thanks, Elizabeth.

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  4. Quick glance through the window as I walk by.
    Beautiful. And sad.

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  5. Yes, to others' comments, and also the too tight cropping of the photo ... The chair cut off ... adds to the air of tension. Nicely done.

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  6. The rhythm of your words combined with the taut emotion is wonderful.

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