Friday, August 20, 2010

Haiku My Heart Friday



We never go in,
(the water, dark) without risk
the tentacles hurt


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15 comments:

  1. OUCH...I am so sorry......oh the ocean beckons us, yet we dare the waters and creatures it holds.

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  2. That picture gave me the cold shivers. Good haiku. Bad tentacles.

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  3. Owie - ouchie! Your haiku is a good warning!

    Yes, some creatures don't particularly like when human descend into their homes....even if the humans mean no harm. Heal quickly from that sting!

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  4. ooo so true...i love ms. moon's comment..i concur

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  5. My first reaction: "OUCH!"

    Then cold shivers.

    Then, "STINGRAY!"

    Then I realized it was a jellyfish sting.

    More cold shivers.

    In general, a chilling haiku. In the grand Hitchcock tradition.

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  6. Leap without looking
    Follow your heart's true desire
    Damn consequences!

    Lovely haiku, horrible sting! I still recall my first visit to the ocean because I got a jellyfish sting. (Thanks for the follow.) Love & Blessings!

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  7. Owww...

    Life itself is a risk. Good poetic reminder.

    Heal quickly!

    ~Deb

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  8. Yes. . . ouch. Some lessons are vivid in memory.

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  9. Only a true artist would think haiku at a time like this.

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  10. Yeow... been there... Hope it feels better soon...

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  11. All -- thanks for your comments and sympathies! I should clarify that the photo is of my son Henry's foot from our vacation recently in South Carolina. He is quite proud of his jellyfish scars!

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  12. i cannot help but appreciate the beautiful pattern and texture of such dangerous evidence.

    finally home...
    missed you!

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  13. OUCH! The waters are risky indeed.. sigh.!

    My Haiku

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